Eternal September

“A week without you, thought I’d forget. Two weeks without you and I still haven’t gotten over you yet.”

Nancy didn’t like it when I teased her about her house. Put politely, it was unfinished. What was meant to be the baby’s room, with its careful design of overlapping squares hand-painted on the walls, had become a storage-space; miscellaneous items suffering a slow transition to the garbage. Her hardwood floors had stains. Light bulbs dangling from fixtures. Things in the yard that hadn’t been moved since they were put down fifteen years prior. A storm destroyed the fence, with only the posts a reminder that her yard had once been enclosed. The front lawn with crabgrass and mushrooms.

Not that one needed to be tremendously perceptive to realize that the house, more or less, had ceased any major evolutionary activity- the kind where the first time homeowner is gifted a Time-Life “Home Repair & Improvement” book set, with plans made that foresaw holiday duties on the path to grandchildren.

She had wanted me to love the beach like she did. Reminders of this- some purchased at home furnishing stores, some given as gifts- served as the main source of décor; reminding me that the beach is her happy place while encouraging me to keep calm and sit by the ocean.

If there’s anything certain left to believe, it’s that we’re living in hell. She didn’t understand why I went on about this- falling short of obsessive but with serious overtones of urgency. The greatest misconception about hell is the fire. People think hell is alive, molecules buzzing anxiously. There may be a cinematic quality to this but it isn’t accurate- it isn’t hell. Hell is cold and dead. Hell is subtle enough for you to doubt that it’s surrounding you.

I liked the beach, but I didn’t love it like Nancy did. I’d meet women there for first dates, where we’d find a bench and watch the sunset as the crashing waves created an ambient soundtrack. I can’t spend my days sitting on a beach, not using my time productively makes me nervous- a horrible consequence of too much time wasted- but at night I like listening to the stories of women.

Typically divorced, but not always- the ones who were married are usually the more mentally stable- they’ll cite a dead bedroom and an unmotivated husband as their chief concern for initiating the separation. There will usually be a pang of regret over disrupting the lives of their children, and the inconvenience of sharing custody, although this is understood as collateral damage. They had all heard of Tinder and were “excited to try it,” with the initial burst of male interest serving as enthusiastic confirmation that they made the right decision. You’ll know how long a woman has been on her own by the way she talks about meeting men.

A woman new on the scene will be enamored by the attention- so many options, often exceeding her wildest fantasies. A gym-rat in his early-thirties, looking to relieve a bit of stress after leaving the office; the twenty-four year old bartender; the frat guy cheating on his teenage girlfriend; everyone vapid and interchangeable, everyone with gaudy AOL screen names- all chasing a woman over forty. She always knew she could do better than her husband- and with the maturity of age, now she’s comfortable enough with her sexuality to indulge without regret.

And even if she had more fun than she ever thought were possible on those lonely nights, sitting under the glow of her television, with an open bottle of wine, playing and replaying the eventual conversation she’d need to have with her husband; even if she had gotten to live out the female version of every man’s fantasy, with the only limit being a time predestined by her own genetic code, a threshold causing the attention to taper- she’ll one day realize that coldness had always surrounded her, even if she couldn’t always feel it.

The beach became Nancy’s happy place when she found her high school sweetheart overdosed in their bathroom- dead & bloated- the beginning of her eternal September. She took their infant daughter and wouldn’t return to the house for three years- the lonely princess in her decaying castle- and she did the best she could. No one could blame her for any decision she made thereafter. This is how she eased into the rest of her days, and there was nothing terribly wrong with it- even if her only wish were to politely color within the lines and walk away with a terrifically neat and tidy picture of a life well lived.

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  1. dickycone · September 19, 2020

    This was really good. My wife’s priests rarely come up with a better argument for believing in Jesus.

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  3. MC · September 19, 2020

    Initial quote reminds me a lot of the lyrics to “Buffalo Grass” (Todd Rundgren).

    • Mistral · September 28, 2020

      Except it’s “Vacation” by the Go-Gos.

  4. Caleb · September 20, 2020

    I have somehow found strength in the idea that we are in a cold sterile hell. If you begin with the idea that your soul is being punished or taught or a lesson, maybe even for wrongdoings in another life, then the small pleasures and moments of beauty shine brighter.

    • Craig · September 20, 2020

      I tend to agree with you. Nature is cold and unforgiving, but every day life in it tends to burn. If you look close enough, you can see the fires all around. Kalifornia knows. 🙂 …and “no good deed goes unpunished”. Oh, and while I’m just rambling on, NO SIMP SEPTEMBER!!!

  5. Craig · September 20, 2020

    “Hell is cold and dead. Hell is subtle enough for you to doubt that it’s surrounding you.” and as always I found the theme song;


  6. Craig · September 21, 2020

    “A week without you, thought I’d forget. Two weeks without you and I still haven’t gotten over you yet.” I’m not sure why, but that quote reminded me of this;

  7. Craig · September 21, 2020

    Eternal September vibe;

  8. Craig · September 21, 2020

    Not so subtle, but yeah, it’s hell. Reminds me of that cartoon of the dog/man sitting at the kitchen table drinking coffee while the whole house around him is burning and he says, “Yeah, everything is just fine!”

  9. Craig · September 21, 2020

    “…the only limit being a time predestined by her own genetic code, a threshold causing the attention to taper-she’ll one day realize the coldness that had always surrounded her.”

    topography was shot in different locales of Argentina and Chile.

  10. Craig · September 21, 2020

    “…all chasing a woman over forty.” Insert tears of laughter emoji here, plus lolzozozozzlzlozllzlzlozozlzzolzzz!!!

  11. Craig · September 22, 2020

    “…where she sat in her decaying castle and did the best she could.” in a dead house

  12. Craig · September 23, 2020

    Hell is; when you realize all those supposed passionate moments of intimacy were all fake. The woman she is when she is sober is not the same woman she is when she is under the influence of her favorite alcoholic beverage or other recreational drugs of choice. Under the influence, inhibitions/anti-slut defenses are down and she is much more in the mood to be wanton full out fucking amorous.
    It just makes me really sad knowing I’ve never been with a woman who would ever feel what I felt for her while sober. That leaves me really fucking cold to no end.

  13. Craig · September 23, 2020

    This helps me stay emotionally detached from women I hook up with every now and then;

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